ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: 50th Painting: A white rose Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:07 pm | |
| I have reached the middle of my goal of 100 small paintings.... I am going after flowers now... I think one can learn a lot from painting flowers. I worked, changed and reworked some more... the intent was to learn. Please, Please, Please... tell me what I can do to improve some more. All constructive criticism are welcome. Thanks Size: 4" x 4" Time: 2.5 hours... [url][/url] | |
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Crystal1
Posts : 639 Join date : 2010-02-05 Location : Ft Worth, TX
| Subject: Re: 50th Painting: A white rose Mon Feb 04, 2013 8:25 pm | |
| The rose is fantastic. I particularly like the darker shadow area near the left-center. | |
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Re: 50th Painting: A white rose Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:38 pm | |
| Thanks Crystal... I think I somehow created two duplicates of this posting... . Oh! well.. | |
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judyfilarecki Moderator
Posts : 2685 Join date : 2009-11-16 Location : Northern NY and Southern Arizona
| Subject: Re: 50th Painting: A white rose Tue Feb 05, 2013 3:52 pm | |
| Perhaps darken the background a bit, especially where the cast shadows would to the right middle and lower portions. It will make the flower stand out more from the background. The rose itself is very well done.
Judy | |
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Re: 50th Painting: A white rose Tue Feb 05, 2013 9:45 pm | |
| Ah! thank you Judy... I agree with you.. I was thinking of that myself.. and you have reinforced it... Thanks Faisal | |
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judyfilarecki Moderator
Posts : 2685 Join date : 2009-11-16 Location : Northern NY and Southern Arizona
| Subject: Re: 50th Painting: A white rose Wed Feb 06, 2013 5:57 pm | |
| Any time. That was the exact suggestion my digital teacher had for me on a rose I painted for the class and it worked like a charm.
Judy | |
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JanG
Posts : 678 Join date : 2012-07-20 Location : NC - USA
| Subject: Re: 50th Painting: A white rose Wed Feb 06, 2013 8:03 pm | |
| I haven't been here in a few days and what a treat to see this when I opened your thread! I'm actually trying to paint roses myself (nothing worth saving so far) and am looking forward to more of your flowers! It would be great if you would post a WIP or give use some steps that you used to paint this. I've watched a video at Jerry's Artarama on painting a rose in the wso's but it just doesn't help! lol Here is the video is anyone is interested.
http://www.jerrysartarama.com/art-lessons/Medium/Oil-Colors/Oil-Colors-How-to-Paint-a-Rose-Using-Water-Soluble-Oils.html | |
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