I think you are right Judy, I will work on those points.
Thanks Crystal. It turned out to be a pretty good likeness and I was trying to capture the softness in her expression, actually a kind of pathos since the scarf is hiding the scar left from her tyroid surgery not too many months before, something she was very sensitive about all her life. Actuall when the picture was taken she was in some pain and I think it shows in her expression, yet she was trying to put on a " good face."