| Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath | |
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Sat Jan 03, 2015 11:52 pm | |
| Another day, another painting. This one is not the usual 6x8 or 5x7. I did this on a an 8x10 panel (Brave me). Please see below for the painting.
All comments and feedback are welcome.
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Re: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Sat Jan 03, 2015 11:53 pm | |
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JanG
Posts : 678 Join date : 2012-07-20 Location : NC - USA
| Subject: Re: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Sun Jan 04, 2015 2:06 pm | |
| I viewed this first on my laptop and thought the pear looked very colorless and washed out compared to the grapes. Now I'm on the desktop computer with the nicer monitor and the pear looks much better. It's this sort of thing that makes me hesitant to comment sometimes!
I do think I'd like to see a bit more contrast or something in the pear though.
So glad you're painting - I'm trying to get back into it!
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Re: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Sun Jan 04, 2015 4:16 pm | |
| Thanks Jan, I think the picture did not come out too well. I will try to retake the picture and try to make it look more like what it actually is. | |
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Re: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Sun Jan 04, 2015 4:43 pm | |
| Jan, The first picture did not come out too well and to fix it I adjusted the saturation etc but it compromised other stuff. I think this looks close to the painting. If there are any shortcomings in this please do tell, I want to hear what you have to say. Thanks. | |
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Re: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Sun Jan 04, 2015 8:23 pm | |
| I see issues with this. It is amazing how much a little break helps to see things with clarity. I will see if I can fix this and repost. Otherwise, it will just be another one of those wasted efforts… | |
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JanG
Posts : 678 Join date : 2012-07-20 Location : NC - USA
| Subject: Re: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Tue Jan 13, 2015 2:02 pm | |
| Please don't scrap it as it really does have real potential. The new photo looks good.
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ftariqtx Moderator
Posts : 1034 Join date : 2011-12-24 Location : Dallas, Texas
| Subject: Re: Painting #106: The Grapes of Wrath Wed Jan 14, 2015 10:46 pm | |
| Yes!… I am keeping it on the side… for now… | |
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